Strengths:
- Good sound, good range of shots, good idea, the shadow thing is really good
- The blood effect on the neck was nice
- Sinister music
- Good use of transitioning
- The actual shots and the order you have cut them in are actually pretty good
- Good angles
- Good music choice, it is almost too happy which fits the film quite nice as it makes us wonder what is going on
Weaknesses/To Improve:
- Bit slow, doesn't really make you scared
- The cuts aren't fast enough
- Music needs to build up
- Dip down the volume of the music for the duration of the sound effects at the start such as when she sees the guy in the mirror.
- Need shorter duration of shots
- Too predictable
- Characteristic banding in a number of shots which usually comes from pushing the shot way too far, or from grading in a program that isn't really designed for it.
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