Group: Rough Cut

This is our first Rough Cut of 'Followed'. We are yet to put in any background music as we need to fit it around the clips and edit down the ones we have already filmed and work out which clips we need to refilm to match the music afterwards. We are also still deciding between a number of endings; which is shown by the end of this clip where there is two alternate endings as we need to choose the most effective one. We also need to still put titles into the opening and work out how we are going to embed them into the footage. As well as this, we also need to put a filter on the footage to give it a more orange tone as it doesn't match the lighting in our other clips. This will create a look of verisimilitude.

Audience Feedback:

Good:

• Range of shoots used made it look effective
• Disappearing behind a bus shot looked good

Criticisms:

• Lipstick part had no relevance and took too long
• Lighting colours were different
• No sound effects

How we plan to improve:

• Add in a reflection shot of the antagonist using the compact mirror within the lipstick part to make it relevant and not boring to watch.
• Alter the lighting colours using effects on Premier
• Add in a background soundtrack as well as some conventional horror sounds to build the tension and make our sequence more exciting to watch.